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Thursday, May 15, 2014
Tuesday, May 6, 2014
Witch Hollow and the Spider Mistress (sample)
A chapter from the upcoming Witch Hollow and the Spider Mistress. Please keep in mind that the sample is not edited. I borrowed the title of the chapter from one of Blind Guardian's songs (as I often do). Here's the video to enjoy (the song has nothing to do with my book, I just love BG very much):
Thorns
Since morning Eric had been trudging by the West Bank of the
Sirtalion. The first hour was spent in the field, where he watched the boys
train, but soon he became bored of just sitting on the grass and witnessing how
all three young men were simultaneously teaching Martin to ride, and how their
constant advice, tips, and commands, instead of helping the young wizard, confused
and flummoxed him. Martin asked a few times to be spared horsemanship sessions,
claiming that driving a flying vehicle would do more good than riding a horse,
but Jack was insistent. Eric shook his head over Jack’s behavior. He had lost
the count of how many times he had told Jack to stop picking on Martin and be
less harsh with him. In the end, Eric became tired of both the training and
Jack, and left the field. Immersed in thoughts, he didn’t care where he was
going, unless he stayed on the West Bank. Some time ago, during one of their
meetings, the young people came to the conclusion that the East Bank was a
place too dangerous for Eric, and he went to live in the blue castle. It wasn’t
an unwanted move: both he and Electra were the most contented, as now they
needed to take just a few steps to see each other. Eric’s bedroom was on the
same floor with the girls’ chamber, just three doors away. It meant that
Electra stayed in his bedroom till late at night and left Eric’s side only for
the sake of sleeping, not forgetting to give him the potion for his broken arm.
Andromeda had promised that the plaster would be taken off in two-three days,
and Eric was waiting eagerly for the day to come.
Eric reached a meadow at the edge of the forest and had an
immediate feeling of déjà vu. The place looked familiar, yet he couldn’t
remember when exactly he had been on the green meadow overgrown with daisies
and bluebells that appeared and disappeared inside the soft grass with every
breath of the cool breeze. Eric looked into the distance, where a stream of the
river was passing across the field. The river at that spot wasn’t the mighty
force with the boats and their passengers skimming across its flowing bosom,
but a quiet stream with mossy banks, reflecting the hanging branches of the
weeping willows.
Eric walked to the rivulet, turned around, and smiled, as he
was now standing on the same spot where for the first time he had seen the
witch girls ride the brooms. Now he remembered the place: the field, the
scenery, the shallow stream. For a long while he just stood there and looked at
the forest trees, lining the field, contrasting the meadow’s calmness with
their disturbing gloominess. Then he turned around and looked at the East Bank.
It had been decided that he wouldn’t go to the other side alone, but Eric
remembered about the Enchanted Garden, which was a few steps away from the
hill, and his legs took him there on their own. He reached the back of the
garden and had to force his way through the withered, leafless bushes with
dried branches. Crawling through the shrubs, Eric at last stepped into the
garden, although it was hard to call the place a garden anymore. The café had
been closed down, because the garden had withered till the last leaf. It wasn’t
appealing anymore. Instead of the blooming flowers and green grass, there were
dry, gnarled branches and trampled, dead foliage. The once thick grass— soft
like a royal velvet—wasn’t stretching across the garden, nor were the flowers
encircling the feet of the aspens; the shades of the Siberian shrubs were
missing, and the willows didn’t cast their shadows over the beds of the yellow
roses. Neither were the larks and rose finches hopping in the grass or perching
on the branches, whistling to each other or warbling for their guests.
Eric hadn’t made a few steps when he saw something sparkle
on the ground inside the grey soil. He bent down and squinted his eyes. Those
were wings shining. Small, almost transparent wings that could belong to a bug
or a butterfly. But it was neither a bug nor any other insect. It was a small
creature, with head and legs, in a tiny yellow dress wrapped around that tiny
body. Eric carefully picked up the fairy and brought the body closer to his
eyes. It was dead, no doubt about it. And yet, Eric carefully touched the
creature with his finger, hoping it would show signs of life. Eric looked
around the garden, and only now noticed a lonely figure in black, sitting by
the rocks where once a pond used to be. It was Dinah, sitting motionless and
staring at the withered bush in front of her. Eric couldn’t tell if she had
fallen into reveries, or if she had seen him. He slowly moved to the broken
pond, passing in-between the abandoned chairs and tables, which had been moved
to a side and left in the garden, probably in hopes that it might bloom again,
or maybe because the café owners didn’t care about the short-lived business
that had turned unsuccessful due to the Enchanted Garden ultimately dying and
withering away.
Eric stopped some feet away from Dinah. He was thinking
whether to start a conversation and what to say. She seemed so sad, so broken
and miserable that he wished to hug and console her. But Eric didn’t stir and
just looked around, then at the center, where the white arbor used to stand, at
the cracked ground, covered with yellowed leaves, and at the dead fairy in his
hand.
“I cancelled the wedding,” Dinah said without looking up.
Eric said nothing, and after seconds of silence, Dinah continued: “I thought my
father would burst out in fury and punish me, but he didn’t even reprimand me.
My mother did most of the talking, and crying, and whining. She kept telling me
how silly I was to reject Thomas, but I would be silly if I did not.” At last
she deigned to raise her eyes to Eric’s face. She looked unhealthy, lips were
pale, eyes weary. “I have become so miserable. I don’t even know why I live.
What’s the point? My world is breaking down. I have no one in my life, no one
who cares for me. My father has estranged himself from us. He almost never talks.
Walks silently up and down his study, has abandoned his craft and students, and
drinks all day long. My mother continues her same old habits: worries about the
most nonsensical things, and doesn’t see that her family is sinking deeper into
the swamp. And my brother. He’s De Roy’s right hand now. Put a mask on his face,
and he’ll be a perfect sheriff. How did we come to this? And how will this
whole story end?”
“Much of its ending depends on us. And our choices,” Eric
said without even thinking.
“If we meet during the Hunt, will you kill me?” she suddenly
asked.
“No.”
“Then you will let me kill you?”
“You will not kill me.”
“How do you know?”
Eric went closer to Dinah, knelt before her, opened her
palm, and put the dead fairy in her hand.
“I didn’t want this to happen,” she said, fighting back the
tears. “But I hate them. And I am glad for what will happen to them soon.”
“Why do you let the hate rule you?”
“It’s your fault. You put so much hate inside my heart. You made me so hateful and vengeful.”
The baffled fellow silently looked at her. He knew well
Dinah’s capricious demeanor and impulsive character. If she had put an idea
inside her head, no one could convince her otherwise.
“You crashed my dreams, broke my heart, filled it with hate,
and you dare ask me why?” she said with offense.
“They killed my parents,” Eric muttered. “But not the hate I
feel toward them leads me. I am led by hope. Why won’t you do the same? The
moment you put aside all your childhood offenses, you’ll see that hate really
has no substance. You don’t have to become a pawn in their war. They use you
like they use the rest. It is their
war, Dinah, not yours or mine; it’s a war of dark creatures who poison your
mind to reach their goal. It’s not about giving you a better life as they have
promised, it’s about destroying. Or do you think the Dark Master cares for you?
Or for your family? He has come to destroy Hollow. Why can’t you see that?”
“And why can’t you see what you have done?”
“Dinah, I am sorry if I have caused you pain. That was never
my intention.”
“Why can’t you see how unhappy I am? I told you everything,
but my words again fell on the deaf ears.” She went down on her knees to face
him and put her hands on Eric’s neck, gripping the collar and dragging him
closer. “You could make me happy. I cancelled the wedding just for you. I gave
you another chance.”
“You did it for your own sake. Because marrying someone whom
you don’t love is wrong.”
“Thomas has sworn to kill you,” she said unexpectedly. “What
are you going to do about that?”
“Defend myself, as always.”
“Come with me, and we shall outplay him.”
“What do you mean?”
“They have planned something. But if you decided to join me,
we could make our own plan.”
“What have they planned?”
Dinah grinned. “You won’t get anything from me unless you
join me.”
“You’ll never change, will you?” Eric said, angered by her
selfishness. “Always thinking only about yourself.”
“That’s not true. I think about you all the time. Why are
you so cruel? Why won’t you join me and make my life less miserable.”
“Because I have made my choice. And you should make yours.”
“I have made it.” She pulled him closer, reaching out to his
lips. Softer than she had thought. So different from Thomas. So much sweeter,
longed-for, and desirable.
Eric gently pushed her back. “I am sorry.”
He was so close that his whisper tipped her lips and made
them quiver. Dinah looked at him for a second, then slapped him with the whole
strength of her hand, and got up. The slap was so strong that the skin felt
burning. Eric pressed his lips together and took his palm to his reddened
cheek.
“Too many people are after you, Eric O’Brian. You’re not
long for this world. I don’t care who it will be—Thomas, Dickens, De Roy, or
Morhaug himself, I want you dead!” she burst out, and clenched her fingers.
Dinah felt something inside her fist. She looked at the tiny breathless body,
then tossed the fairy into the bushes, and stormed away from the garden.
Eric dashed to the withered shrub of lavender, searching for
the little creature. It was there, among the faded leaves and grass. Carefully
picking up the fairy, Eric put her on the naked branch to be picked up by her
friends. Dinah was right, too many people were after him. He should remember
about caution and not stay alone on the East Bank. Eric thought he heard
footsteps in the garden. He hastily looked around, but there was no one. He
strained his ears and waited for the voices and whispers to sound again, but
the garden was silent. Just once the metallic gate creaked, when the wind blew
through the iron bars. Then silence again. No sound, no soft whispers. The
garden had been abandoned by those who could revive the reveries and lead him
back into the long-forgotten dreams. Now it was only a dried soil, gnarled
branches, and dusty tables and chairs grouped into a pile and left to rust. Not
even the constant rains helped the garden. Drenched in gushing water, it would
become muddy, but nothing would grow in the slush, and the soil would soon
become dry, until the next torrent would plunge the place into a deeper mire.
A loud thunderbolt informed that it was time to leave.
Taking the same route, Eric carefully crawled out of the garden, and descended
to the meadow. Moving hastily, so as not to be left under the rain, he soon
reached the field where his friends had been training, and which was now
abandoned by everyone except Jack, who was lying on the grass, hugging Orion’s
soft body. Eric looked at the dog and his master. Their eyes were closed, both
seemed to be dozing and even when the thunder growled again, none of them
showed signs of awakening. Orion yawned once, his white head pressed against
his master’s chest, then wagged his tail, and returned to dozing. But when the
first drop landed on the dog’s snout, Orion opened his eyes, raised the beautiful
head, and whined.
“Alright, boy, I heard you,” Jack muttered, yawning. Orion
rose to his paws, approached Eric, and licked his hand. Eric answered the dog’s
caress, itching him behind the ear, just what Orion loved.
“You seem upset,” Jack said, getting up grudgingly and
yawning again. Another drop hit him on the head; he looked up into the murky
sky. “I hate these rains.”
“Let’s go home,” said Eric, and the friends
hurried to the blue castle, with the white Setter by their side.
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